The Hinterlands Chronicles: Bilqis


It’s been a while friends. I’ve been busy with work, and even more grat­i­fy­ing, I have been get­ting some con­sis­tent writ­ing done. I’m not mak­ing the great big leaps that I’d like but con­sis­ten­cy is more impor­tant in my esti­ma­tion. I haven’t for­got­ten about my blog here, or my read­ing, but with a full time job, well, some­thing has got to give, yeah? And some of my indie writer friends have had recent suc­cess­es (Lind­say Buro­ker being one such per­son) that have inspired me to work even hard­er to com­plete this project. I believe in this sto­ry and it has been with me for sev­er­al years. I’m still quite a way off but I am so very hope­ful. So hope­ful in fact, that I thought I would share a lit­tle snip­pet from Bilqis. Read and enjoy.

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Some time had passed since Bilqis left Sec­tor Five, but not enough to for­get how being there used to make her feel, like both prey and preda­tor, both afraid and empow­ered. What came over Bilqis as she stepped from the ground floor plat­form was an instinct born of the emo­tions that came rush­ing back to her. The abrupt and easy squar­ing of her already broad shoul­ders, the cool set of her jaw, bright eyes hood­ed yet keen­ly alert was so deeply intrin­sic it was as if she had shed a cos­tume to reveal her true self. She had after all spent her entire life behind the invis­i­ble sec­tor bound­aries and it was only nat­ur­al that she would, as much as she hat­ed to admit it, find a cer­tain com­fort in the famil­iar yet treach­er­ous sur­round­ings.  

The weak didn’t sur­vive Sec­tor Five and many of the strong didn’t either. Bilqis moved east toward Mid­dle­ton, com­pelled by some deep need to revis­it her old home, cut­ting through the human­i­ty and the detri­tus like a scythe.  

Author­i­ty inves­ti­ga­tors were still no clos­er the find­ing the per­son respon­si­ble for insti­gat­ing the riot and the destruc­tion of Aju­tine Aero­nau­tics, although a sketch of the name­less sus­pect, in his mid twen­ties, with a broad deep brow, dark deep set eyes, and a sen­su­al­ly curved mouth that seemed some­how too petite to belong to a man, had been plas­tered across the city. Bilqis stopped to study one such fli­er print­ed on thin bright yel­low plas­tic paper. The dig­i­tal image of the sus­pect rotat­ed nine­ty degrees to the left and then to the right. When the image stopped cen­ter, it closed its eyes. She didn’t rec­og­nize him.

Beside the sketch of the sus­pect hung a fad­ed fly­er encour­ag­ing res­i­dents to vis­it their local clin­ic for free vac­ci­na­tions and health exams. Peo­ple com­plained about Goodwill’s tough poli­cies but Bilqis thought that the efforts he made to take care of Ajutine’s res­i­dents were com­mend­able, and more than pre­vi­ous may­ors had done.

A left at the next inter­sec­tion and three blocks east took Bilqis to Mid­dle­ton and Bright. She was stu­pid­ly mol­li­fied to find that her old apart­ment build­ing, all of Mid­dle­ton and the two scant blocks north of it, had been spared the blaze that ate up near­ly an eighth of Sec­tor Five, though she was unsure why. She’d nev­er liked liv­ing there. The plumb­ing always backed up foul green muck and every inti­ma­cy and indig­ni­ty could be heard through the paper thin walls. And it wasn’t as if Taha would ever return. Too much time had passed.

A set of crum­bling stairs led from the brief court­yard to a grungy lit­tle foy­er lined with bro­ken mail­box­es, accord­ing to mem­o­ry. She didn’t go inside. It was enough to see ithat the build­ing had sur­vived unashamed­ly ugly amongst even ugli­er build­ings and cir­cum­stances. The res­i­dents here, like in much of Sec­tor Five, were steeped on the kind of pover­ty that was worn beneath the skin. Even now, three years out, when she had plen­ty, there was always a lin­ger­ing hunger, like an itch that no scratch would ever relieve.

But her suc­cess wasn’t so sin­gu­lar. Not every­one who could wished to leave Sec­tor Five. Some were deter­mined to call the place for­ev­er home, think­ing them­selves noble and devout. Accord­ing to them the price of leav­ing was too high. Accord­ing to Bilqis they were fools. They refused to take the pledge to forego faith, unwill­ing to sign away their gods. Bilqis had been will­ing.

May­or Good­will sought only to enforce the laws that already exist­ed, under which Sec­tor Five would cease to be a safe haven for the faith­ful. Start­ing at the begin­ning of the com­ing year every­one would be forced to sign the pledge of faith­less­ness or take their life to the hin­ter­lands, eke out a life there on the vast bar­ren plains. Bilqis fig­ured that when that time came, plen­ty of peo­ple would let go of their notions of pride and sub­mit. No num­ber of riots or fires was like­ly to stop Goodwill’s plans to cleanse Aju­tine, to pre­vent anoth­er dis­as­ter like that of 2035, to allow anoth­er Bilqis Har­ban, sword of the peo­ple, to be cre­at­ed.

Weav­ing through vehi­cles jammed at the inter­sec­tion Bilqis crossed to the oppo­site side of the street. Half a block up she stopped at the cart of a street ven­dor and bought a sand­wich of dried meat and onions and cheese wrapped in soft yeast­less bread. She took a bite of the sand­wich, unaware until that moment just how hun­gry she had been..

Not pro­tein meal,” she stat­ed and enquired at once. She hadn’t eat­en real ani­mal flesh since leav­ing Sec­tor Five. Every­where else such fare was con­sid­ered parochial.

The ven­dor unabashed­ly took her in from head to foot as he spoke. “Course not. I only sell real meat.” He point­ed to the fad­ed writ­ing on the umbrel­la over his cart.

What kind of meat is it?” She took anoth­er great mouth­ful.

He held up a fin­ger as if struck by sud­den inspi­ra­tion. “Now that’s the ques­tion, isn’t it?” He didn’t elab­o­rate fur­ther but he did extend his hand. “You owe two bills for that sand­wich. Four if you’d like anoth­er.”

Bilqis paid the old ven­dor and left. Three blocks east, Bilqis turned into an alley. It was dark and buffered the clois­ter of nois­es from the street. She found the door at the very end of the alley where it butted up against a brick wall.

Bilqis knocked three times, wait­ed five sec­onds and then knocked twice. Sec­onds lat­er the door inched open, but Bilqis could see lit­tle more than a sin­gle glassy eye as it looked out at her.

Who?” demand­ed the dis­em­bod­ied voice.

Bushrah.” Bilqis crossed her arms. “She here?”

The door eased open a bit more and a face, mid-teens and male, emerged from the dark­ness. “Show me,” he said nod­ding.

Bilqis unzipped her jack­et and pulled down the col­lar of her shirt to expose the tiny black fist tat­tooed just beneath her col­lar­bone. He flashed the beam of a hand torch onto her face and then low­ered it to the mark on her chest. His hard angu­lar face soft­ened beneath the weight of naked respect. “Band­ed in red,” he said, awe chok­ing the tim­ber of his voice, fur­ther betray­ing his youth.

Her mem­o­ry of that tat­too was strong. Her broth­er Taha had drawn it him­self, the nee­dle loaded with ink laced with the oil of the atarahu. “So that you’ll nev­er for­get the pain of our peo­ple,” he’d told her. The tat­too had burned beneath her skin for months after it had healed. The very mem­o­ry revived the old tat with stabs of prick­ly heat.

The black fist was the sym­bol of The Walls the largest and most fierce of the Sec­tor Five cabals. The black fist rimmed with red indi­cat­ed a mem­ber of high rank. In the case of Bilqis, it was not she who had pos­sessed a high rank, but her broth­er Taha. He had ensured more than her safe­ty with that red line. He’d guar­an­teed her pro­tec­tion. She was prac­ti­cal­ly roy­al­ty among The Walls, untouch­able.

Who wants Bushrah?” he asked, back to busi­ness.

Bil­lie,” she said reclaim­ing the nick­name she hadn’t used since leav­ing Sec­tor Five.

He pushed open the door and sig­naled for her to enter ahead of him. “Okay Bil­lie,” he said eyes flick­ing back to the area below her left col­lar­bone, “I’ll take you to her.”

I Have Done My Job


Idealised workspace, 2011

A a writer there are very few things I want more than to have my writ­ing read. That sounds sim­plis­tic, but it does touch on the gen­er­al gist of what I mean. Cer­tain­ly I want my read­ers to like what they’ve read, to write stun­ning reviews, tell all of their friends about me, there­by caus­ing my sales to sky­rock­et, caus­ing me to make lots (not insane amounts, just lots) of mon­ey, so that I can pay off my house, give in char­i­ty, give my chil­dren a great life and quit my day job so that I can cre­ate more tales that peo­ple want to read, BUT none of that is as impor­tant to me that my writ­ing is actu­al­ly read.

I would be a writer even if I nev­er made a sin­gle pen­ny doing it. (Which isn’t that far off the mark right now.)

Like most writ­ers, I have some­thing to say. As an intro­vert, since I rarely actu­al­ly say these things out loud, writ­ing is my mode of expres­sion. I write the kinds of sto­ries I would like to read, sto­ries that res­onate with me, and that hope­ful­ly have deep­er mean­ings. I’m not try­ing to con­vert any­one to my way of think­ing or teach any­one a les­son, (preach­i­ness in fic­tion is a big no-no), but I do hope that when read­ers have com­plet­ed my tales they walk away with lin­ger­ing impres­sions about the char­ac­ters and sit­u­a­tions, that they con­tin­ue to think about the sto­ry for days or even weeks in an effort to suss out the deep­er mean­ings, or at the very least because they’ve grown attached to a char­ac­ter and they miss her.

Recent­ly I received a very unex­pect­ed heart-warm­ing email from a woman who had just com­plet­ed my book. She’d down­loaded it for free dur­ing one of my past Ama­zon KDP pro­mo­tions. She said:

I have sub­se­quent­ly told friends about An Unpro­duc­tive Woman and what a won­der­ful insight into anoth­er part of the world and cul­ture as well a mes­sage to all of that we are so very alike in so very many ways.”


While not a Chris­t­ian, I do believe in a pow­er greater than myself.  The absolute every­day faith depict­ed in your book caused me to down­load the Qur’an too, I have my read­ing cut out for me for some time to come!”

The very fact that she took away the mes­sage of ulti­mate same­ness across cul­tures and faiths from my nov­el despite the sup­posed diver­gences there appear to be and that are played up by our media absolute­ly took my breath away. Even more, in spite of the fact that An Unpro­duc­tive Woman is not a reli­gious read, the fact that she made the con­scious deci­sion to learn more about peo­ple (Mus­lims) who are often made to seem oth­er and alien is the great­est val­i­da­tion and the great­est pay­ment I could ever receive for my writ­ing.

When I received her mes­sage I near­ly cried. It let me know that I have done my job.


Thank you for the email S.V. You made my year… prob­a­bly my career as a writer.

Thank you Kin­dle Buf­fet for post­ing my book on your site so that peo­ple would know I exist.

Thank you to any­one who has ever hon­ored me with the time it took to read my book and write a review… even if it wasn’t favor­able.

Hap­py Ramadan to EVERYONE

Character Traits


How to Care for Introverts:  Wise WordsWhat is your favorite char­ac­ters per­son­al­i­ty type?

If you are a writer, how do you decide what your protagonist’s per­son­al­i­ty will be?

I recent­ly start­ed giv­ing this deep­er thought after watch­ing Pitch Black for the mil­lionth time.  I love that movie because of the tit­u­lar char­ac­ter, Rid­dick. My favorite char­ac­ters tend to be sim­i­lar; tac­i­turn, intro­vert­ed, cun­ning, decid­ed, and func­tion­ing by a moral com­pass of their own mak­ing. Rid­dick def­i­nite­ly pos­sess all of those traits.

I con­sid­ered Riddick’s per­son­al­i­ty traits and I tried to deter­mine what his per­son­al­i­ty would be based on the Myers-Brig­gs Type Indi­ca­tor.  The best I could come up with was ISTP (intro­ver­sion, sens­ing, think­ing, per­cep­tion) because he is not a peo­ple per­son, he uses his sens­es to gath­er infor­ma­tion and under­stand the world around him, hence the sil­ver eyes that help him see in the dark, he acts based on what he thinks is right as opposed to his feel­ings, and he keeps his options open, usu­al­ly for the swift get away.  Based on the old D&D align­ment trait sys­tem, I believe that Rid­dick is chaot­ic neu­tral.

Chaot­ic neu­tral char­ac­ters are wild, unpre­dictable and often fol­low their own per­son­al code with­out a care for oth­ers — they are often self­ish and the only thing pre­dictable about them is their unpre­dictable natures. This is the align­ment of rogues, anti-heroes, the mad (when not chaot­ic evil) as well as char­ac­ters who do not fol­low nor­mal eth­i­cal codes but do not active­ly seek to destroy the nat­ur­al order either (as a chaot­ic evil char­ac­ter would).

Yup. Sounds like Rid­dick to me.

This got me think­ing about the main char­ac­ter of my WIP, The Hin­ter­land Chron­i­cles. Dr. Bilqis Haq is a law abid­ing cit­i­zen. She wants to keep the peace, and although spir­i­tu­al­ly con­flict­ed she is will­ing to do any­thing, includ­ing stuff­ing her feel­ings and beliefs, to bring such peace to fruition. She is what I like to term a sheeple. In oth­er words, she is a fol­low­er and is nev­er a will­ing leader. By the end of my WIP, life will change dras­ti­cal­ly for my poor lit­tle pro­tag­o­nist. The calm she wish­es to main­tain will be chal­lenged. She will be forced to choose sides, nei­ther of which is opti­mal. There will be no good choic­es and she will not have the option of hang­ing back and let­ting some­one else do the choos­ing.

In the process, her per­son­al­i­ty will even­tu­al­ly change. She will cease to be law­ful good. She will become chaot­ic good or per­haps, if pushed chaot­ic neu­tral. Watch­ing Bilqis make the change will be excit­ing.

I decid­ed to take the Align­ment Test myself, just to see where I fall on the spec­trum. I was not sur­prised to learn that, like Rid­dick I am chaot­ic neu­tral. I knew I’d be chaot­ic neu­tral because of ‚my will­ing­ness to chal­lenge tra­di­tion, my unwill­ing­ness to fol­low soci­etal nor­ma­tive behav­iors with­out first ques­tion­ing their use­ful­ness, and my will­ing­ness to break the rules if they do not make sense to me.

My Myers Brig­gs per­son­al­i­ty isINTP along with Marie Curie, Jung, Ein­stein, Data and Sev­en of Nine (Star Trek), Sher­lock Holmes, and Albus Dum­b­le­dore.

What align­ment trait is your favorite char­ac­ter? What align­ment trait are you? What are your Myers-Brig­gs char­ac­ter­is­tics?